雅思作文计算机的利与弊素材(雅思写作科技)
导语：雅思8.5分大作文 / 相较于科研，为何计算机更受欢迎？
How far do you agree with this statement?
第一段：背景+题目改写+观点 ( 有一定坏处，但不至于直接限制）
第二段：论点+论据（1：日常生活需要计算机 2：学术也离不开）
第三段：论点+论据（ 从学术造假，信息杂乱罗列了消极影响）
第四段：总结+回应观点
高分词汇
Beneficial: 有利的 restrict: 限制 educational tool：教育工具
Essential：核心的 independent search skills: 独立研究技能
论证段的写作模式：论点+论据（最好是两个论点，例子其实可有可无）
但对于只想拿6-6.5的学生 论点+说理+例子的模式也行，因为比较简单
第一段：背景+题目改写+观点 ( 有一定坏处，但不至于直接限制）
Nowadays, the Internet is used widely in education around the world.（背景） Some people say it is beneficial for teaching and learning because there is so much information available. However, others claim that the Internet is bad for students&39;s everyday lives, both for finding information, for personal finance, for keeping in touch with friends and family, for social networking and so on. Therefore, school students should learn how to use it correctly.（论据一，从现实生活中的各种场景说明网络的重要性，很多学生会漏掉后面therefore这句话，这个其实很要不得，上课时候也经常强调一定要给结论）In addition, students also need it for research in school and university subjects. Nowadays the most up-to-date information can be found on the Internet, rather than in books which can become out of date very quickly. Using the Internet is a convenient way of finding out information and developing independent research skills. （论据二，从学术研究的层面上讲清楚为何孩子们要学习电脑）
第三段：论点+论据（ 从学术造假，信息杂乱罗列了消极影响）
However, the Internet has some negative aspects （论点，表明电脑也存在弊端）. For example, not all websites are reliable or contain accurate information. Students need to learn how to evaluate and check the material they find on the Internet （论据一，表明孩子们本身因素，无知，分辨不了真假）. Also, many students simply copy large amounts of material, such as essays from the Internet. Some students then pretend that this material is their own work, which is illegal. If students simply copy information or material from the Internet without understanding or analysing it, they will not learn it fully （论据二，交代清楚网络对学生们学术的影响）. Teachers need to teach students how to research and use information from the Internet properly （结论，结合第一段所讲的，有一些坏处，但是合理引导还是对学生很有利）.
第四段：总结+回应观点
In conclusion, schools and universities should teach students how to use the Internet by teaching them good research skills （明确观点，不应该禁止使用网络电脑等）. If students know how to use the Internet effectively, they are likely to become better students and have better employment opportunities in the future （总结第二段所提到的好处）. (314 words)
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