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英语一大作文

英语（一）大作文，一般分为三段。

第一段：描述图画，揭示图画中心主题。

第二段：围绕中心主题，展开讨论，提出分论点。

第三段：得出结论，提出号召，建议等。

第一段写法

1. 描述图画

常用句型：

如果是没有比较的：As is portrayed in the picture, there is/are 人或物, who/which引导的定语从句

例1：As is portrayed in the picture, there are four young people, who are sitting around a dining table and playing on the cellphones. 如图所示，四个年轻人坐在餐桌前玩手机。

例2：As is portrayed in the picture, there is a boat with tourists, which is leaving behind a lot of trash on the surface of the river. 如图所示，一艘载着游客的船在河面留下了大量垃圾。

如果是有比较的：As we can see, 主语+动作 while 主语+ 动作。

例1：As we can see, the goal keeper is thinking the goal gate is too big to keep while the striker is considering it is too small for a ball to enter.正如我们看到的：守门员正认为球门太大了不好守住，而进攻球员却认为它太小球不好进。

例2：As we can see, the flower thrives under the shelter of the green house while the flower withers without any protection in the heavy rain.

正如我们看到的，在温室的保护下的花长得很好，而没有保护的花在暴雨中枯萎了。

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随堂练习：

1. 如图所示，两个只有一条腿的残疾人互相扶持，丢开拐杖共同前进。

2. 正如我们看到的，二十年前，妈妈拉着女儿的手，而现在，长大的女儿扶持年迈的妈妈。

参考答案：

1. As is portrayed in the picture, there are two disabled men with only one leg, who are supporting each other and moving forward together without the help of walking sticks.

2. As we can see, a mother was holding his daughter’s hand twenty years ago while the grown-up daughter is now supporting the ageing mother.

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