雅思9分作文范文(雅思9分写作范文)

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Nowadays many people have access to computers and a large number of children enjoy playing video games.

What are the advantages and disadvantages of playing video games for children?

好处：① 缓解孩子们的孤独感 ② 益智类游戏对孩子的发展有益

坏处：① 容易游戏上瘾，荒废学业（to be addicted to video games )

② 游戏包含暴力内容，可能误导孩子们（violence )

第一段：交代背景+改写题目

In today&39;s activity as some games may be more suitable than others （结尾总结二三段，不要引出新的观点或者论点）.

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